Hello Danial!
First of all, congratulations for providing the well-thought-out and well-located additions to your play.
I suggest that you rephrase passages that have question-and-answer dialogue. Characters speak because of a NEED to speak, not because someone asked them a question and they have to provide an answer.
Do a final trim before submitting this play to TheatreWorks. After they assign your play to a director, he or she will most certainly make cuts due to the constraint of running time. As I advised Nanda regarding his play, you might as well do the initial cuts yourself rather than disagree with what the director decides to cut later.
Other than those, good work!
I hope that I will be in Singapore to watch the staged reading of your play.
First of all, congratulations for providing the well-thought-out and well-located additions to your play.
I suggest that you rephrase passages that have question-and-answer dialogue. Characters speak because of a NEED to speak, not because someone asked them a question and they have to provide an answer.
Do a final trim before submitting this play to TheatreWorks. After they assign your play to a director, he or she will most certainly make cuts due to the constraint of running time. As I advised Nanda regarding his play, you might as well do the initial cuts yourself rather than disagree with what the director decides to cut later.
Other than those, good work!
I hope that I will be in Singapore to watch the staged reading of your play.
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